First Draft Annamatic

Our Task:

Our task was to produce a rough animated storyboard containing cuts, fades etc for the first 2 minutes of our main project which included a title sequence. We firstly discussed and created a shot list which we then drew up a storyboard. This is only our first draft anamatic using all of our story board sketches that as a group we produced using combined ideas and cooperation. However we inverted the sketches to show our white images against a black background. We will improve our animatic until it is perfect then we can actually go out and start filming our proper piece. We only have a few improvements that need to be made which is included in the feedback. But overall our anamatic successfully displays our film in a rough way. However a shot that seems unclear is shot 10. This is because we are breaking the 180 degree rule and that is why the shot is so long. Our animatic was hard to portray because we only had still images to use however we added in a few effects and annoted shots such as shot 10 but otherwise everyone got the idea of our shots.

Our Piece:

Our Feedback:

The inverted images were very effective.

A wide variety of shots were used.

However, too short, we may need: longer shots

Missing titles: actors and actresses, the title of film, cinematography, editor, sound, producer, director.

Diegetic sound is needed

The pace of editing is good, a good sense of continuity